Tuesday, September 6, 2011
The Contents of the Dead Man’s Pocket” Minute Paragraph
when i was ten i had got hit be a car. The car was going about 45 mph and when it hit me while i was playing football with my friends. one of my friends was throwing the football when the car bent the corner without stoping and the car took my legs out when i jump for the ball. When i was laying on the floor my right leg was like bent to the left and i was crying and it just feelt like some one cuting my leg off. The guy that hit me got out of the car and was like freak out and after that i just pass out.
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agree with you because that's a moment to remember.You post reminds me of when I was little I got in a car accident. Your post is unique because you wrote about getting hit:)
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ReplyDeleteBrandon, you are a sophomore. Write like one. Fix your capitalization errors. Beginning of sentences need to be capitalized!!! The pronoun "I" also needs to be capitalized.
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