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My career goal is to play in the NFL. I will acheive this goal by getting good grades in my classes good engough to get inside an unerverity. And while iam diong that I need to try my hardest in every footall game and geting inside the weight room everyday. And another thing I can do is join groups in school like ASB to show i can get allong with different types of people. If i kdo these thing i would be able to acheive my goal without a problem.