Tuesday, August 23, 2011
First Day of School Paragraph 2011
when i woke up on the first day of my first year of san pasqual academy i thought it was going to be a little lide back but when i haerd we had a 300 word easy it made my day worse then what i aready was. At first i had to wait like an hour fro my class. Then i went to miss priester class an i was late so i had to catch up with the class. Later i went to 3 period and i hate that classs because i dont need and it would look bad if i had that on my report card. Towards the end of they day i went to biology class and i think thats going to be my favoit class of them all. later on i went to world history and i think thats the baddest class am in because everybody talks in that class and its real boring. At they end of the day i had to go to math class and math is just a boring subject but sense i got my sister with me i think thats going to make ot better.
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Brandon, remember to look over your work before posting it. Make sure that when you refer to yourself (I), capitalize the pronoun. :)
ReplyDeleteCapitalize proper nouns, too. This means names of people and places (San Pasqual Academy).
Double check that your punctuation is correct, too.
shift + i = I
Gosh. It sounds like you had a negative day. I hope things have gotten better within the past month.
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